Excellent Ella. One point that needs revising! Don't reference "Basic Instinct" because it is a misogynist film.
Instead say something like ...the perpetrator of the potential crime in our film suggests the hooded girl but this could be a red herring. Her purpose may be revenge thus female audiences who enjoy "The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo" iconic trilogy and an androgynous powerful female lead will be attracted to our film. She is enigmatic whilst the innocent representation of the boy runner may be the red herring!
Try to think about this quick revision.
Thoughtful, intelligent and articulate, indicating a confident understanding of audience...but loose Basic Instinct!!!!!
Excellent Ella. One point that needs revising! Don't reference "Basic Instinct" because it is a misogynist film.
ReplyDeleteInstead say something like ...the perpetrator of the potential crime in our film suggests the hooded girl but this could be a red herring. Her purpose may be revenge thus female audiences who enjoy "The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo" iconic trilogy and an androgynous powerful female lead will be attracted to our film. She is enigmatic whilst the innocent representation of the boy runner may be the red herring!
Try to think about this quick revision.
Thoughtful, intelligent and articulate, indicating a confident understanding of audience...but loose Basic Instinct!!!!!
Grade A with quick revision as suggested above.