1) At beginning dissolve Ella putting coat over corpse into next shot. 2) At o.32 dissolve into shot of Ella putting gloves on 3) 0.37 dissolve into next shot or hold this shot longer. 4) 1.10 to 1.11 longer dissolve 5) 1.19 - 1.21 dissolve into woodland shot 6) At end quick cut to a kitchen shot with Louis at sink at heighten sound of gun shot.
1) At beginning dissolve Ella putting coat over corpse into next shot.
ReplyDelete2) At o.32 dissolve into shot of Ella putting gloves on
3) 0.37 dissolve into next shot or hold this shot longer.
4) 1.10 to 1.11 longer dissolve
5) 1.19 - 1.21 dissolve into woodland shot
6) At end quick cut to a kitchen shot with Louis at sink at heighten sound of gun shot.
Great use of titles and quick cuts at end v.good.