1) I suggest you transfer to power point or another form of presentation and organise in sections with SCREEN SHOTS FROM RESEARCHED TEXTS AND YOUR FILM AS A COMPARISON.
2) slide 1: Representation of gender: A comparison to your representation of the strong woman is in contrast to the archetypal femme fatale. For example (Gilda" in film of same name singing Put the Blame on Mame
But your representation is more akin to Lisbeth Salander in "The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo who is a computer hacker (usually associated with young males) deviant, uncompromising and heroic but bent on revenge.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4rWpND28Jos You Tube: The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo (Swedish Original) - Official Trailer [HD) Screen shots at 0.44 and 1.01. Lisbeth Salandar is a computer hacker and is uncompromising.
The enigma in your film is why Ella wants to shoot Louis or why does he feel paranoid about being shot? What has he done, is this revenge?
3) Slide 2: Ethnicity, lack of diversity because there was little choice in a mainly ethnically white British 6th form. So like films such as ......... and ........ (You could reference the recent TV drama "The Night Manager" or TV thriller "Happy Valley". Lack of diversity was also an issue raised at the Oscar ceremony this year. You could Google this.
4) Slide 3: Representation of British youth: Isolated, paranoid, living in their own heads; preoccupied with fitness.....details in power point I've just sent you to support your answers.
Please organise as I've advised and avoid essay type answers presented like a word documents.
Well done Ella, with revisions and additions I suggest a strong Level 3 to 4
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ReplyDeleteIntelligent and articulate but difficult to read.
ReplyDelete1) I suggest you transfer to power point or another form of presentation and organise in sections with SCREEN SHOTS FROM RESEARCHED TEXTS AND YOUR FILM AS A COMPARISON.
2) slide 1: Representation of gender: A comparison to your representation of the strong woman is in contrast to the archetypal femme fatale. For example (Gilda" in film of same name singing Put the Blame on Mame
But your representation is more akin to Lisbeth Salander in "The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo who is a computer hacker (usually associated with young males) deviant, uncompromising and heroic but bent on revenge.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4rWpND28Jos
You Tube: The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo (Swedish Original) - Official Trailer [HD)
Screen shots at 0.44 and 1.01. Lisbeth Salandar is a computer hacker and is uncompromising.
The enigma in your film is why Ella wants to shoot Louis or why does he feel paranoid about being shot? What has he done, is this revenge?
3) Slide 2: Ethnicity, lack of diversity because there was little choice in a mainly ethnically white British 6th form. So like films such as ......... and ........ (You could reference the recent TV drama "The Night Manager" or TV thriller "Happy Valley". Lack of diversity was also an issue raised at the Oscar ceremony this year. You could Google this.
4) Slide 3: Representation of British youth: Isolated, paranoid, living in their own heads; preoccupied with fitness.....details in power point I've just sent you to support your answers.
Please organise as I've advised and avoid essay type answers presented like a word documents.
Well done Ella, with revisions and additions I suggest a strong Level 3 to 4
I have re read your response and it is potentially an A grade response, but please put on power point.
ReplyDeleteAt present Level 3+ (B++) a straight A if you submit using more creative technology.
Urgent: Add another label G324 Evaluation Rough Drafts and post this answer under this label. Thanks Ella.
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