An interesting, splendidly organised and detailed case study.
Your are able to proficiently identify and explain the connotations of generic conventions whilst also referencing examples from the mise-en-scene to strengthen your points. Your case study indicates engagement and developing understanding of film language.
Next Steps:
1) Avoid repeating "bad", instead find a similar word such as threatening, menacing, corrupt, depraved, psychopathic ....
2) Eve and the corrupt cops are generic archetypes thus in the opening Leone strongly establishes the generic blue print of the film.
Keep up the good work .... I suggest this is Grade B
An interesting, splendidly organised and detailed case study.
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Next Steps:
1) Avoid repeating "bad", instead find a similar word such as threatening, menacing, corrupt, depraved, psychopathic ....
2) Eve and the corrupt cops are generic archetypes thus in the opening Leone strongly establishes the generic blue print of the film.
Keep up the good work .... I suggest this is Grade B