You have made some interesting points Ella, particularly about representation and the use of colour.
To strengthen:
1) LA Confidential is a feature film, whereas LA Noir is a computer game.
2) Both texts strongly reference the dress code of the 1940's and 50's which is a tribute to the classic period of film noir.
3) You could add to this case study by referencing Page 6 of your coursework booklet and identify specific codes and conventions of the thriller genre that are established in both of these clips.
4) Look at Emily Maskell's response to the summer task (12C 2014-2015) This is a grade A response and thus is an exemplar of what it is quite possible for you to achieve.
5) You need to root your analysis more closely to evidence in the texts.
6) Your presentation is quite difficult to read! Speak to Mr Seal about using issuu (he is the authority) and see how you could make your interesting presentation more readable.
You are on the right road Ella but your analysis needs to be more focused.
Level 3, Cish. With further development your grade can be adjusted upwards. Do not delete your presentation but instead add to it if you want a better grade.
You have made some interesting points Ella, particularly about representation and the use of colour.
ReplyDeleteTo strengthen:
1) LA Confidential is a feature film, whereas LA Noir is a computer game.
2) Both texts strongly reference the dress code of the 1940's and 50's which is a tribute to the classic period of film noir.
3) You could add to this case study by referencing Page 6 of your coursework booklet and identify specific codes and conventions of the thriller genre that are established in both of these clips.
4) Look at Emily Maskell's response to the summer task (12C 2014-2015) This is a grade A response and thus is an exemplar of what it is quite possible for you to achieve.
5) You need to root your analysis more closely to evidence in the texts.
6) Your presentation is quite difficult to read! Speak to Mr Seal about using issuu (he is the authority) and see how you could make your interesting presentation more readable.
You are on the right road Ella but your analysis needs to be more focused.
Level 3, Cish. With further development your grade can be adjusted upwards. Do not delete your presentation but instead add to it if you want a better grade.